Inside your skin there is a living thing.
I know you wouldn't believe it for first sight,
but I feel its heartbeats.
I can imagine how I make the beat go up when I touch you.
I can imagine how it calms down when you put your head down on my lap.
I remember when I listened your heartbeats when I laid down with you.
They were banging agaist my ear.
Heartbeats.
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I know you wouldn't believe it on first sight, but I feel its _heartbeat_.
Prepositio tossa "down on my lap" kohdassa olisi mielestäni 'in', mutta en ole ihan varma.
Heartbeat = sydämen syke, heartbeats = sydänten syke. Melkoinen monsteri.
Ja banging tarkottaa lähinnä panemista.. Että beating sopis varmaan paremmin siihen mitä yrität sanoa. :) Hyvää syntymäpäivää.