Runoilija InLove

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Liittynyt: 8.6.2004

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So in love <3
 

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Sorrow in my soul, searching for the goal,
but it seems so hard to get.

When I think of you.

It's when I feel warm, feel safe.
You're the one who cures my soul,
you gave me the reason for fight for my goals.

I never stop loving.

I'm really sorry now of what I've done.
Cause when I'm with you, there's no end in sight.

I can't stop loving you.

Selite: 
You touched my heart you touched my soul. You changed my life and all my goals. And love is blind and that I knew when, My heart was blinded by you. I've kissed your lips and held your head. Shared your dreams and shared your bed. I know you well, I know your smell. I've been addicted to you.
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Selite: 
You touched my heart you touched my soul. You changed my life and all my goals. And love is blind and that I knew when, My heart was blinded by you. I've kissed your lips and held your head. Shared your dreams and shared your bed. I know you well, I know your smell. I've been addicted to you.

todella kauniisti kirjoitettu,
ja englannin kieli tosiaan sopii tähän.
pisteitä voisi vähentää tai jättää kokonaan pois, mutta muuten todella kaunis.

Selite: 
You touched my heart you touched my soul. You changed my life and all my goals. And love is blind and that I knew when, My heart was blinded by you. I've kissed your lips and held your head. Shared your dreams and shared your bed. I know you well, I know your smell. I've been addicted to you.

Mä pidän tästäkin. Sä oot kehittyny kirjoittajana, aika paljon. Sulla on vaan joku pistepano menossa. :P

Kauniita ajatuksia, ja tosi nättejä vertauksia englanniksi.

"Cause when I'm with you, there's no end in sight.

I can't stop loving you."

Tälläseen en oo ennen muissa runoissa törmänny. Niin että vaikka aihe on klisee, niin teksti ei ole. Toi on mun mielestä tosi kaunis kohta. <3

Tiesitkö muuten, että kun lukee pelkästään noi yksittäiset lauseet, sieltäkin tulee sama tarina.

When I think of you.

I never stop loving.

I can't stop loving you."

Ai vitsi tää oli hieno.

 

Käyttäjän kaikki runot