I feel again..
the in side death has gone..
she had taken it away
she made my see that there's light for my too..
she made my life worth of living...
Our first kiss made my realise that i need to face my inside death...
and now...
i have finally won it...
but it didn't die...
it lives in my past..
darkest past...
| Runoilija | Runon nimi |
Luontipäivä |
Kommentteja | Kategoria |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| The angel of Death | Kyyneleet savuun... | 28.12.2006 | 3 | Runo |
| The angel of Death | There are no happy endings... | 27.11.2006 | 0 | Runo |
| The angel of Death | Hope is nothing | 27.11.2006 | 0 | Runo |
| The angel of Death | when the clock starts to ticking.. | 15.11.2006 | 1 | Runo |
| The angel of Death | Fear... | 1.9.2006 | 0 | Runo |
| The angel of Death | mitä tahansa | 1.9.2006 | 0 | Runo |
| The angel of Death | Takapakkia.. | 27.8.2006 | 0 | Runo |
| The angel of Death | Your smile | 22.8.2006 | 1 | Runo |
| The angel of Death | erillainen paha poika... | 20.8.2006 | 2 | Runo |
| The angel of Death | pakko toisto | 29.6.2006 | 0 | Runo |
Kommentit
Onko tarkotuksella joka kohdassa että "my" ?
Kun tässä kohdassa esimerkiksi"Our first kiss made my realise" pitäs olla että me. "made me realize"
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