![Käyttäjän <span class="sydan sydan-vihrea"><svg width="10"height="10"viewBox="0 0 1000 1000"xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"><path d="M497,203C537,107,630,40,737,40C881,40,985,164,998,311C998,311,1005,347,990,413C969,503,919,583,852,643L497,960L148,643C81,583,31,503,10,413C-5,347,2,311,2,311C15,164,119,40,263,40C370,40,457,107,497,203z"/></svg></span> Syntinen kuva](https://cdn.vaiste.com/sites/rakkausrunot.fi/files/styles/medium/public/profiilikuvat/picture-2497-1629631109.jpg?itok=bdc1PvXp "Käyttäjän <span class="sydan sydan-vihrea"><svg width="10"height="10"viewBox="0 0 1000 1000"xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg"><path d="M497,203C537,107,630,40,737,40C881,40,985,164,998,311C998,311,1005,347,990,413C969,503,919,583,852,643L497,960L148,643C81,583,31,503,10,413C-5,347,2,311,2,311C15,164,119,40,263,40C370,40,457,107,497,203z"/></svg></span> Syntinen kuva")
I don't love you anymore;
I only take what I'm looking for.
I don't need any explanations
in this perfect situation.
I don't know what to say or do
but I still care about you
and if it's raining out there,
I'm not going anywhere.
Listen to your heart;
you always want a new start
but there's only one part
in your heart.
Stop loving me;
it's not good for you.
You must believe me;
there is nothing else to do.
Selite:
Omasta mielestäni aika huono runo, jossa on varmaankin miljoona virhettä, mutta arvostelkaa te.
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yhdyn edelliseen arvostelijaan molemmissa asioissa
it might be be impossible to stop loving.
good flow in your nicely written poem.
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